Wednesday, October 17, 2007

New and revised story

The story about a weeping willow name Winnie that live in forest park that’s kind of deteriorating. There also a woodpecker named Paulownia that spend it day pecking away at the weeping willow tree because it like to eat the delicious bugs in the tree. Woodpecker pecks at the tree without knowing that its hurting the tree. Every time the Tree tries to talk to the woodpecker but there is too much noise around and the woodpecker has bad hearing. The weeping willow gets tried of being peck by the woodpecker and wait until it goes to sleep. Then when the woodpecker goes to sleep the trees steals his beak and throw it away in a trashcan. To teach the woodpecker a lesson
 Paulownia wakes up and decides he should get some delicious bugs to eat for breakfast. Paulownia starts to peck on the tree to get some breakfast and knock him self out and fall out of the tree. 
 Paulownia wakes up and realizes his beak is gone. So he looks around to try to find his beak. Time pass by he still hasn't found his beak... Then all of a sudden a piece of fruit fall out the tree and his the wood pecker on the head he decide he will try to eat it but then realizes he can't eat with out his beak. The woodpecker cries where my beak. The tree shows the woodpecker that it has it beak but won’t give it to him until he realize what he doing to the tree. Winnie the tree tries to show the wood pecker that he hurting her and that he need to stop because he killer her slow. The woodpecker see the tree pain and realize that the tree look horrible because he’s destroy it slowly Woodpecker decides to change to help the tree and realize that he doesn’t have to eat bug but realizes he like the fruit a whole lot better.

Wednesday, October 10, 2007

new revised story

1. Paulownia the wood pecker live down south of australia called kalgoorik. Paulownia pecks at the weeping willow tree to get food and the declious bug in the tree bark. Wood pecker peck at the tree without knowing that its hurting the tree. Everytime the Tree try to talk to the woodpecker but there to much nose around and the woodpecker has bad hearing.

2. The weeping willow gets tried of being peck by the woopecker and wait until it goes to sleep. Then when the woodpecker go to sleep the trees steals his beak and throw it away in a trash can. To teach the woodpecker a lesson

3. Paulownia wakes up and decide he should get some delicious bugs to eat for breakfast.
Paulownia starts to peck on the tree to get some breakfact and knock him self out and fall out of the tree.

4.Paulownia wakes up and realizes his beak is gone. So he looks around to try to find his beak.

5. Time pass by he still hasn't found his beak... Then all of a sudden a piece of fruit fall out the tree and his the wood pecker on the head he decide he will try to eat it but then realizes he can't eat with out his beak. The wood pecker crys where my beak.

6. The tree pokes palownia with it branches and starts to to talk to the the wood pecker and says do u promise not to hurt me anymore and i will give you your beak back.

7. Paulownia apologizes to the tree and says sorry i didn't know i was hurting you. tree give the beak back. wood pecker trys the fruit and decide he likes the fruit better than the bugs. The woodpecker never pecks on the tree again.